Industrial Cleaner Girl

Great job. Loved the voice, the story, the way the two minutes was filled but not stuffed, the way I got to know something about you in merely two minutes, but also connected to the broader ideas of identity. You used humor effectively. Good luck!

I agree with all previous comments...Laura is something special. She's a natural. I love her ability to let you into her world without sounding false. Anyone who listens feels like they've made a friend. Great sense of humor too! I also know she's very inquisitive which also enhances her "hostiness".

I think you have a GREAT entry. Your voice is easy going, and your story is funny without being forced. I think you have an EXCELLENT radio personality, and I even dig your name. :-)

ADQ

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http://www.publicradioquest.com/audio/user/6914

Keep on rockin' in the free world.

You, Shine, may be just what the judges are looking for. Good luck to you.
Jim Barfuss
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“Life is full of surprises. When I looked toward the future in my youth, I did not see myself standing here.” Seymour B. Moore

Dear Laura, Great piece! And another one of those hidden gems, where somehow or another no one has left a comment for you. Very well written, very funny, and you have a nice hostiness about you. Laura Shine by any name could be a new NPR host. Jill