[audio] Mangina
Transom would have nothing to do with this piece. And so, obviously, I thought I would showcase it here. I hope this will be the start of several second-stringers showcasing their work amidst the forums. Unconstructive criticism is appreciated:
This was a quick edit of a friend of mine who coaches football at our local high school. And when you're on the gridiron, not everything's as simple as X's and O's.
- Mangina (mp3)
P.S. I'm not really trying to get this picked up. Just hoping you all can have a quick, cheap laugh at the expense of a fragile high school freshman.
delicious
diggI know all too well the perils which may come with a name. It's funny, but I can easily see why Transom would decline. Edit out the snickers, replace them with expressions of embarrassment or regret, and it may fall on more sympathetic ears.
The story needs to be told at his expense, not the boy's.
Rich Meitin
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My only criticism is the music. The horns were nice, but the music overall sounded like it had digital artifacts...or fuzz... or as if the piece was encoded at a low sample rate.
Other than that - I thought it was strong.
-Rich
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Steve
We can philosophize together until the words fail us.
Totally charming. And I dug the music, too. Perhaps took a little too long with it at times, but not enough to make it not the very enjoyable thing that it is.
The punctuation provided by the horn section is a great touch.
Well it got a laugh out of me. :) I like your friend's voice. It sounds just like what a freshman football coach would sound like.
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